Today,
i want to give you so important information. Its about simile. That we know a
simile is an easy way to compare two things, so exampe of simile poems include
any poem that makes comparisions using the words “ like, as,so, than,or
variousverbs such as resemble”. As long as the comparison is one
thing to another, whether or not th two things being compared are actually
alike or not, you can consider it a simile poem.
Based
Book i have read, Simile is usually used in forms of poetry, is sometimes
divorced from its proper relationshipand forced into the association of prose.
Smile is always the product either of the fancy or of the imagination, and is
therefore a poetic attribute.
On
the page four said that sometime the author to do a mistake. I mean the danger
of simile. the danger of simile are many, the first thing to do is to
make sure that you have such an understanding of these that you do not fall
into ny one of the many pitfalls they present; that once done, you should
consider their value, both as a means of ornament and as a means of implying a
secondary meaning through association of ideas; and then you will be able to
make use of them fearlessy and efectively.
We will take these dangers in order, and see how they affect style and see if
we can discover
any means of certainly avoiding them.
1.
Artificiality. This is nearly always
due to what I may call the deliberateuse of similethat is, to a trick too often
used by inexperienced authors of imitating deliberately the type of simile
used by authors whose style they admire.
2.
Floridness. This is a horrible word, but it
is the only one that adequately expresses my meaning. I mean by it the
overloading of ornament the employment of so much simile that it cloys the
imagination and wearies it unnecessarily. For you must not forget that the
realization of a simile does necessitate the use of quite a considerable amount
of imaginative power, and that if you force your reader to a rapid series of
such realizations, he will have none left for the more important realization of
your story.
a. Purely descriptive
b. Associative
c. Ornamental only
d. To give an effect proverbial wisdom.
PURELY DESCRIPTIVE. The useof simile for description is, as said
at the beginnng, the chief use tto which it is put; it behooves you, therefore,
to be especially careful in your use of it, so that you employ it to the very
best advantage in this capacity. Take this, from a novel of last year’s date:
“ her face was like a large and limpl stuffed
cushion on which the features have been carelessly grouped and fastened on by
means of a pair of glasses like a safety pin.”
Or this
from a rather older novel
“ her skin was like the skin of a sucked
grape, soft and wrinkled”
To
acquire a free, bold and good use of simile, you should to do three things;
first, and most important, to watch the similes that occur to you
instinctively, rejecting the bad and stoping up the good for future use.
Associative.
The second use of simile is nearly as important as that of pure direct
description; it is this, to suggest by means of the simile employed the hidden
character of the thing you are describing. Thus Dickens, describing a fire
which is going to cause an incendiary blaze, says:
“The fire glowed sullenly, like the eye of a savage beast half asleep.”
That prepares you for the fact that it is going to do harm. If you read that a character in a book has eyes “like a wolf’s,” you know that he will have something of the wolf in his nature; if, on the other hand, he has eyes “like a dog’s,” you understand that he will probably be faithful as a dog is; and yet a wolf’s eyes are very like a dog’s. You can thus use simile to insinuate a characteristic which you do not wish to put into so many words. This is very useful—if you do not allow it to lead you into making obvious similes and indicating stock characteristics, as is the case in this second example. The first example is good, for the simile is not too commonplace, and the intention of implying evil is clear; the second is both a commonplace simile and depends for any truth it may have on the stock idea of the natures of dogs and wolves.
“The fire glowed sullenly, like the eye of a savage beast half asleep.”
That prepares you for the fact that it is going to do harm. If you read that a character in a book has eyes “like a wolf’s,” you know that he will have something of the wolf in his nature; if, on the other hand, he has eyes “like a dog’s,” you understand that he will probably be faithful as a dog is; and yet a wolf’s eyes are very like a dog’s. You can thus use simile to insinuate a characteristic which you do not wish to put into so many words. This is very useful—if you do not allow it to lead you into making obvious similes and indicating stock characteristics, as is the case in this second example. The first example is good, for the simile is not too commonplace, and the intention of implying evil is clear; the second is both a commonplace simile and depends for any truth it may have on the stock idea of the natures of dogs and wolves.
Ornament.
This is a quite legitimate, tho very dangerous, way of employing simile.
Sometimes a simile put in merely to improve the rhythm of a sentence, or to
enhance the effect of a description already given, is justified by its result;
but the dangers are obvious. You run the risk of creating an impression of
artificiality or of over¬loading. However, when you have really mastered the
diffi¬cult art of creating good simile, either by careful compari¬son in your
mind’s eye or by the study of the means em¬ployed by such creators of simile as
Conrad and Mr. Ches¬terton, you can well experiment with the ornamental use of
simile. It is particularly effective in a story written in a rather bare,
straightforward style; the sudden introduction of a particularly apt simile
arrests the attention, and forces the reader to take particular note of the
passage in which it occurs. So, too, it is often very effective to recur to a
simile already made in order to recall the circumstances under which it was
first made. For instance, in “Lord Jim,” when the author wishes to remind the
reader of the state of mind of his hero on an earlier occasion without putting
it before him in so many words, he again makes use of the simile employed on
the earlier occasion. He again refers to the “thin gold shaving” of the moon
and the sea “like a sheet of ice,” and immediately the reader thinks of the
first occasion on which the similes were used—the time before the desertion of
the Patna—and instinctively com¬pares the old Jim with the new. Dickens uses
this artifice, too, but less delicately; he repeats his simile again and again,
and at intervals so short that he uses the device as a hammer to drive in his
intention.
The ornamental use of simile in sentence-rhythm is a very subtle one. It is too vast a subject to be entered into here; I will just say that sometimes the whole balance of a sentence depends upon the effective use of simile—a sonor¬ous or impressive sentence depending on a dignified simile taken from a vast fact of creation, such as time, life, death, or eternity; a musical sentence requiring something daintier and lighter, such as a simile taken from birds or flowers or running water; and a rugged style needing yet a different type, more abrupt and startling, less polished, more paradoxical.
The ornamental use of simile in sentence-rhythm is a very subtle one. It is too vast a subject to be entered into here; I will just say that sometimes the whole balance of a sentence depends upon the effective use of simile—a sonor¬ous or impressive sentence depending on a dignified simile taken from a vast fact of creation, such as time, life, death, or eternity; a musical sentence requiring something daintier and lighter, such as a simile taken from birds or flowers or running water; and a rugged style needing yet a different type, more abrupt and startling, less polished, more paradoxical.
Proverbid.
The air of ancient and elemental wisdom that some authors strive so hard and so
unsuccessfully to attain can often be gained by the right use of simile; but
here your effect will depend entirely on the choice of the kind of simile.
Simile is used very largely by country folk and peasants of all lands,
particularly Celts; but their similes are of a very particular kind, and to get
your effect you must know exactly the kind of thing that peasants say. “As cold
as charity,” for instance, is a peasant saying as old as the fourteenth century
at least, and it has the true ele¬mental ring; it might be found in the Bible,
or in any book that contains a true rendering of the thought of a simple
people. In Ireland you hear people saying such things as “the two hands of him
were as cold and as wet as a mile¬stone and the rain streaming over it,” or,
“sure, he’s no more, good than a feather in a storm of wind.” You do not hear
them saying (as a certain Irish private, famous in modern literature, is made
to say): “Their little bare feet were better than the white hands of a Lord’s
lady, and their mouths were like puckered roses.” Simile is a good way of
achieving your effect if you are speaking of peasant life, for it is one of the
poetic beauties of genuine peasant speech; but it must be such simile as would
naturally occur to a cowherd or a fisherman or a washerwoman.
the kind of simile :
PROSE SIMILE
1.
Like an eagle at sea, he was
alone.
2.
Ambition is like hunger; it
obeys no law but its appetite
3.
Ambition is like love, impatient
both of delays and rivals
4.
You are still as straight asan
arrow.
5.
She was beautifull as a morning
in spring time
6.
She explored new minds, like a
travel in uknown lands
7.
Broken bubbles are like Humpty
Dumpty: they can’t be put together again
8.
The castle was gray and grim
like a brooding sentinel
9.
The city was like a fairyland or
a nightmare, as the mind chose to take it.
10.
He ruled audiences like an
uncrowded king.
POETIC SIMILE
April
For
April sobs while these are so glad;
April
weeps while these are so gay,-
Weeps
like a tired child who had,
Playing
with flowers, lost its way
Emotion
For
there aremoments in life, when the heartis so full of emotion,
That
if by chance it be shacken, or into its dephts like a pebble
Drops
some careles word, it foverflows, and it secret,
Spilt
on the ground like water, can never be gathered together
Grass
The
green grass floweth like a stream
Into
the ocean’s blue

44 komentar:
I like the material of your presentation but I do not like the way you explain it
You focus read this article,you should be explain well and give example that easy to understanding your readers,thanks:)
Hey. I've seen your picture there. Your best friend friend is as sharp as pencil?. How if the pencil not shap anymore. Can u called that was sharp?
In your article you have 4 main uses of simile.and please can you explain and give example according expert.
Hello Widya. After i read your post i wanna give question about simile, can you give me comparison between one expert with the another expert. ?
And then tell me about point of view from the another expert. Thankyou
Widya tok 😁
Please,try to explain the definition of the experts about simile or history from simile.
Oke???thank you
Why were you always focused on your phone and there is no interaction .do you think this class is grave?
Hii widya..your blog will be interesting if you change the view of your blog by giving a beautiful color or background on the wallpaper of your blog..thank you, i just give a suggestion :(
so sorry, next time i will not do it again dear
thanks for your suggestion :)
ahay, actually its not my pic. but its for my cover of this material, simile. hmm, in my mind, the pencil will not sharp anymore, but it is called tompul >_< nooooo, tumpul " dull pencil" but if we relate to friends, i think its same, sharp.sometime we dunno our friends like what. i mean they are just be really nice outside, but inside they are not
i think thats :P
yes, this class is so grave, lol
nooo, im kidding :P
so sorry for my mistakes, next time i will not do it anymore
thanks for ya suggestion,but im interested with this template, so simple. maybe in phone is looked different by laptop.
Hello widya. You only give examples without explanation. Could you tell me definition about prose simile, poetic simile, and emotion ? Thank you
hai awik.. or widya. i just want to comment your presentation, so far so good. but u always focus with your gadget and didn't interaction with us as a audience...
Hy widya lova..Please provide an explanation and an example of the discussion is in the use of our daily sentences
I don't like your blog, because you don't have a something new for remake your blog becoming good. Hey! It's public. Do not embrass yourself.
Hi, Widya Lova. Why your writing style is a mess? Maybe you can fix it to make it look good
Hi Widya, thanks a lot for posting this material. but I damn wonder of your written. you wrote above that so the main uses of simile are four, and are as follows:
a. Purely descriptive
b. Associative
c. Ornamental only
d. To give an effect proverbial wisdom.
and fact, you just explained not at all.
please clear all of those
thanks
I don't like your posting because your posting not make me understand about this topic and u presentation is same so boring
i think you did not hear me at presentation. i have done explain it in front of class. prose simile, we dont need follow the rules of poem, in bahasa tidak mesti berakhiran huruf "d" semua.
poetic simile, it must follow the rule. like the example april, dydy.
and emotion, i think you are misunderstanding. its not the kind of simile. but its another examples by poetic simile, thanks
i'm sorry for mistake, i promise never do it again
lol, never embrass myself. actually early morning i was editing my blog at class and hell yeah there's something went wrong and made it worse. ya,i was editing in blog**r app, as you know its not good app enough.
but thanks for your honet
before my blog about this material is nice. but early morning i was editing to add some paragpahs and so pity i am, and my blog look random asdfgh :(
so sorry, i will fix it
damn, i think you did not hear me at class. i just explained it in front of class. but ya i dont writte in my blog.where did you go? >_<
PURELY DESCRIPTIVE. The useof simile for description is, as said at the beginnng, the chief use tto which it is put; it behooves you, therefore, to be especially careful in your use of it, so that you employ it to the very best advantage in this capacity. Take this, from a novel of last year’s date:
“ her face was like a large and limpl stuffed cushion on which the features have been carelessly grouped and fastened on by means of a pair of glasses like a safety pin.”
Or this from a rather older novel
“ her skin was like the skin of a sucked grape, soft and wrinkled”
To acquire a free, bold and good use of simile, you should to do three things; first, and most important, to watch the similes that occur to you instinctively, rejecting the bad and stoping up the good for future use.
Associative. The second use of simile is nearly as important as that of pure direct description; it is this, to suggest by means of the simile employed the hidden character of the thing you are describing. Thus Dickens, describing a fire which is going to cause an incendiary blaze, says:
“The fire glowed sullenly, like the eye of a savage beast half asleep.”
That prepares you for the fact that it is going to do harm. If you read that a character in a book has eyes “like a wolf’s,” you know that he will have something of the wolf in his nature; if, on the other hand, he has eyes “like a dog’s,” you understand that he will probably be faithful as a dog is; and yet a wolf’s eyes are very like a dog’s. You can thus use simile to insinuate a characteristic which you do not wish to put into so many words. This is very useful—if you do not allow it to lead you into making obvious similes and indicating stock characteristics, as is the case in this second example. The first example is good, for the simile is not too commonplace, and the intention of implying evil is clear; the second is both a commonplace simile and depends for any truth it may have on the stock idea of the natures of dogs and wolves.
Ornament. This is a quite legitimate, tho very dangerous, way of employing simile. Sometimes a simile put in merely to improve the rhythm of a sentence, or to enhance the effect of a description already given, is justified by its result; but the dangers are obvious. You run the risk of creating an impression of artificiality or of over¬loading. However, when you have really mastered the diffi¬cult art of creating good simile, either by careful compari¬son in your mind’s eye or by the study of the means em¬ployed by such creators of simile as Conrad and Mr. Ches¬terton, you can well experiment with the ornamental use of simile. It is particularly effective in a story written in a
rather bare, straightforward style; the sudden introduction of a particularly apt simile arrests the attention, and forces the reader to take particular note of the passage in which it occurs. So, too, it is often very effective to recur to a simile already made in order to recall the circumstances under which it was first made. For instance, in “Lord Jim,” when the author wishes to remind the reader of the state of mind of his hero on an earlier occasion without putting it before him in so many words, he again makes use of the simile employed on the earlier occasion. He again refers to the “thin gold shaving” of the moon and the sea “like a sheet of ice,” and immediately the reader thinks of the first occasion on which the similes were used—the time before the desertion of the Patna—and instinctively com¬pares the old Jim with the new. Dickens uses this artifice, too, but less delicately; he repeats his simile again and again, and at intervals so short that he uses the device as a hammer to drive in his intention.
The ornamental use of simile in sentence-rhythm is a very subtle one. It is too vast a subject to be entered into here; I will just say that sometimes the whole balance of a sentence depends upon the effective use of simile—a sonor¬ous or impressive sentence depending on a dignified simile taken from a vast fact of creation, such as time, life, death, or eternity; a musical sentence requiring something daintier and lighter, such as a simile taken from birds or flowers or running water; and a rugged style needing yet a different type, more abrupt and startling, less polished, more para¬doxical.
(c) Proverbid. The air of ancient and elemental wisdom that some authors strive so hard and so unsuccessfully to attain can often be gained by the right use of simile; but here your effect will depend entirely on the choice of the kind of simile. Simile is used very largely by country folk and peasants of all lands, particularly Celts; but their similes are of a very particular kind, and to get your effect you must know exactly the kind of thing that peasants say. “As cold as charity,” for instance, is a peasant saying as old as the fourteenth century at least, and it has the true ele¬mental ring; it might be found in the Bible, or in any book that contains a true rendering of the thought of a simple people. In Ireland you hear people saying such things as “the two hands of him were as cold and as wet as a mile¬stone and the rain streaming over it,” or, “sure, he’s no more, good than a feather in a storm of wind.” You do not hear them saying (as a certain Irish private, famous in modern literature, is made to say): “Their little bare feet were better than the white hands of a Lord’s lady, and their mouths were like puckered roses.” Simile is a good way of achieving your effect if you are speaking of peasant life, for it is one of the poetic beauties of genuine peasant speech; but it must be such simile as would naturally occur to a cowherd or a fisherman or a washerwoman.
okay thanks
okay, lets see!!!!
according the book i have read, PURELY DESCRIPTIVE. The useof simile for description is, as said at the beginnng, the chief use tto which it is put; it behooves you, therefore, to be especially careful in your use of it, so that you employ it to the very best advantage in this capacity. Take this, from a novel of last year’s date:
“ her face was like a large and limpl stuffed cushion on which the features have been carelessly grouped and fastened on by means of a pair of glasses like a safety pin.”
Or this from a rather older novel
“ her skin was like the skin of a sucked grape, soft and wrinkled”
To acquire a free, bold and good use of simile, you should to do three things; first, and most important, to watch the similes that occur to you instinctively, rejecting the bad and stoping up the good for future use.
Associative. The second use of simile is nearly as important as that of pure direct description; it is this, to suggest by means of the simile employed the hidden character of the thing you are describing. Thus Dickens, describing a fire which is going to cause an incendiary blaze, says:
“The fire glowed sullenly, like the eye of a savage beast half asleep.”
That prepares you for the fact that it is going to do harm. If you read that a character in a book has eyes “like a wolf’s,” you know that he will have something of the wolf in his nature; if, on the other hand, he has eyes “like a dog’s,” you understand that he will probably be faithful as a dog is; and yet a wolf’s eyes are very like a dog’s. You can thus use simile to insinuate a characteristic which you do not wish to put into so many words. This is very useful—if you do not allow it to lead you into making obvious similes and indicating stock characteristics, as is the case in this second example. The first example is good, for the simile is not too commonplace, and the intention of implying evil is clear; the second is both a commonplace simile and depends for any truth it may have on the stock idea of the natures of dogs and wolves.
Ornament. This is a quite legitimate, tho very dangerous, way of employing simile. Sometimes a simile put in merely to improve the rhythm of a sentence, or to enhance the effect of a description already given, is justified by its result; but the dangers are obvious. You run the risk of creating an impression of artificiality or of over¬loading. However, when you have really mastered the diffi¬cult art of creating good simile, either by careful compari¬son in your mind’s eye or by the study of the means em¬ployed by such creators of simile as Conrad and Mr. Ches¬terton, you can well experiment with the ornamental use of simile. It is particularly effective in a story written in a rather bare, straightforward style; the sudden introduction of a particularly apt simile arrests the attention, and forces the reader to take particular note of the passage in which it occurs. So, too, it is often very effective to recur to a simile already made in order to recall the circumstances under which it was first made. For instance, in “Lord Jim,” when the author wishes to remind the reader of the state of mind of his hero on an earlier occasion without putting it before him in so many words, he again makes use of the simile employed on the earlier occasion. He again refers to the “thin gold shaving” of the moon and the sea “like a sheet of ice,” and immediately the reader thinks of the first occasion on which the similes were used—the time before the desertion of the Patna—and instinctively com¬pares the old Jim with the new. Dickens uses this artifice, too, but less delicately; he repeats his simile again and again, and at intervals so short that he uses the device as a hammer to drive in his intention.
The ornamental use of simile in sentence-rhythm is a very subtle one. It is too vast a subject to be entered into here; I will just say that sometimes the whole balance of a sentence depends upon the effective use of simile—a sonor¬ous or impressive sentence depending on a dignified simile taken from a vast fact of creation, such as time, life, death, or eternity; a musical sentence requiring something daintier and lighter, such as a simile taken from birds or flowers or running water; and a rugged style needing yet a different type, more abrupt and startling, less polished, more para¬doxical.
Proverbid. The air of ancient and elemental wisdom that some authors strive so hard and so unsuccessfully to attain can often be gained by the right use of simile; but here your effect will depend entirely on the choice of the kind of simile. Simile is used very largely by country folk and peasants of all lands, particularly Celts; but their similes are of a very particular kind, and to get your effect you must know exactly the kind of thing that peasants say. “As cold as charity,” for instance, is a peasant saying as old as the fourteenth century at least, and it has the true ele¬mental ring; it might be found in the Bible, or in any book that contains a true rendering of the thought of a simple people. In Ireland you hear people saying such things as “the two hands of him were as cold and as wet as a mile¬stone and the rain streaming over it,” or, “sure, he’s no more, good than a feather in a storm of wind.” You do not hear them saying (as a certain Irish private, famous in modern literature, is made to say): “Their little bare feet were better than the white hands of a Lord’s lady, and their mouths were like puckered roses.” Simile is a good way of achieving your effect if you are speaking of peasant life, for it is one of the poetic beauties of genuine peasant speech; but it must be such simile as would naturally occur to a cowherd or a fisherman or a washerwoman(Grenville Kleiser)
Hey hey widia you just explained about smile too nervous you not focus.so i can't geet your point about this topic?
ghost, i dont have name tok :(
you can call me awik or lova :P
Simile is usually used in forms of poetry, is sometimes divorced from its proper relationshipand forced into the association of prose. Smile is always the product either of the fancy or of the imagination, and is therefore a poetic attribute( grenville kleiser) for history, so sorry i dunno. i have tried it, looking for books, journals and also googling. i dont get it
really? i think you are nervous, till you wrong to mention my name. WIDYA no widia:)
Simile comes from the Latin word similis which means something similar and that is basically what a simile is. It is a comparison between two things that are different but may seem similar in a way. It is different from metaphor as it does not say that something is exactly like something else (like metaphor), instead it just makes a direct comparison of the similarities.
For example – Those two are like two peas in a pod; sometimes they even say the same things. – Here the comparison is made between two people being very similar in thought and action, the way that peas are nearly identical to one another.
There are no specific rules of simile construction in the English language; it depends entirely on your imagination and creativity. The only thing you must make sure of is to compare two things that may have a similar look or feel, etc..
Generally the prepositions ‘like’ and ‘as’ are used to form similes :
She is as graceful as a ballerina.
His voice is like the lion’s roar.
according grenville kleiser Simile is usually used in forms of poetry, is sometimes divorced from its proper relationshipand forced into the association of prose. Smile is always the product either of the fancy or of the imagination, and is therefore a poetic attribute.
and A simile is a figure of speech in which one thing is likened to another. This is usually achieved by the use of the word like or as.
so i think the point of view both of them are same. why? cause simile is comparison between two things that are different but may seem similar in a way.
hy widya,when u presentation why were you always focused on your phone and there is no interaction.Are you nervous???
maybe, but sorry im foccus on phone. but i think sometimes i look the audinces too, but not for long time. so sorry, i hope i never do it again ;)
it is enough for me. no space to debate. thanks
Your discussion is too long, it makes me hard to understand about your explanation, please show point to point about your material. Thankyou
thank's a lot :)
lol, i have changed or fixed my blog. so many suggestion or comments asking about that.
nice widya,i see your blog very interesting to read:)
thanks
Oh ya, I'm sorry.. after I see it by laptop. It looks so beautiful, and I really like it..
thanks after explain to me
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