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Senin, 24 April 2017

SIMILE





Today, i want to give you so important information. Its about simile. That we know a simile is an easy way to compare two things, so exampe of simile poems include any poem that makes comparisions using the words “ like, as,so, than,or variousverbs such as resemble”.  As long as the comparison is one thing to another, whether or not th two things being compared are actually alike or not, you can consider it a simile poem.
Based Book i have read, Simile is usually used in forms of poetry, is sometimes divorced from its proper relationshipand forced into the association of prose. Smile is always the product either of the fancy or of the imagination, and is therefore a poetic attribute.
On the page four said that sometime the author to do a mistake. I mean the danger of simile. the danger of simile are many, the first thing  to do is to make sure that you have such an understanding of these that you do not fall into ny one of the many pitfalls they present; that once done, you should consider their value, both as a means of ornament and as a means of implying a secondary meaning through association of ideas; and then you will be able to make use of them fearlessy and efectively.
                         We will take these dangers in order, and see how they affect style and see if we can discover
            any means of cer­tainly avoiding them.
     
           1.      Artificiality. This is nearly always due to what I may call the deliberateuse of similethat is, to a trick too often used by inexperienced authors of imitating deliber­ately the type of simile used by authors whose style they admire.

            2.      Floridness. This is a horrible word, but it is the only one that adequately expresses my meaning. I mean by it the overloading of ornament the employment of so much simile that it cloys the imagination and wearies it un­necessarily. For you must not forget that the realization of a simile does necessitate the use of quite a considerable amount of imaginative power, and that if you force your reader to a rapid series of such realizations, he will have none left for the more important realization of your story.
 
The main uses of simile are four, and are as follows:
a. Purely descriptive
b. Associative
c. Ornamental only
d.  To give an effect proverbial wisdom.

PURELY DESCRIPTIVE. The useof simile for description is, as said at the beginnng, the chief use tto which it is put; it behooves you, therefore, to be especially careful in your use of it, so that you employ it to the very best advantage in this capacity. Take this, from a novel of last year’s date:

“ her face was like a large and limpl stuffed cushion on which the features have been carelessly grouped and fastened on by means of a pair of glasses like a safety pin.”

Or this from a rather older novel

“ her skin was like the skin of a sucked grape, soft and wrinkled”

To acquire a free, bold and good use of simile, you should to do three things; first, and most important, to watch the similes that occur to you instinctively, rejecting the bad and stoping up the good for future use. 

Associative. The second use of simile is nearly as important as that of pure direct description; it is this, to suggest by means of the simile employed the hidden character of the thing you are describing. Thus Dickens, describing a fire which is going to cause an incendiary blaze, says:
“The fire glowed sullenly, like the eye of a savage beast half asleep.”
That prepares you for the fact that it is going to do harm. If you read that a character in a book has eyes “like a wolf’s,” you know that he will have something of the wolf in his nature; if, on the other hand, he has eyes “like a dog’s,” you understand that he will probably be faithful as a dog is; and yet a wolf’s eyes are very like a dog’s. You can thus use simile to insinuate a characteristic which you do not wish to put into so many words. This is very useful—if you do not allow it to lead you into making obvious similes and indicating stock characteristics, as is the case in this second example. The first example is good, for the simile is not too commonplace, and the intention of implying evil is clear; the second is both a commonplace simile and depends for any truth it may have on the stock idea of the natures of dogs and wolves.

Ornament. This is a quite legitimate, tho very dangerous, way of employing simile. Sometimes a simile put in merely to improve the rhythm of a sentence, or to enhance the effect of a description already given, is justified by its result; but the dangers are obvious. You run the risk of creating an impression of artificiality or of over¬loading. However, when you have really mastered the diffi¬cult art of creating good simile, either by careful compari¬son in your mind’s eye or by the study of the means em¬ployed by such creators of simile as Conrad and Mr. Ches¬terton, you can well experiment with the ornamental use of simile. It is particularly effective in a story written in a rather bare, straightforward style; the sudden introduction of a particularly apt simile arrests the attention, and forces the reader to take particular note of the passage in which it occurs. So, too, it is often very effective to recur to a simile already made in order to recall the circumstances under which it was first made. For instance, in “Lord Jim,” when the author wishes to remind the reader of the state of mind of his hero on an earlier occasion without putting it before him in so many words, he again makes use of the simile employed on the earlier occasion. He again refers to the “thin gold shaving” of the moon and the sea “like a sheet of ice,” and immediately the reader thinks of the first occasion on which the similes were used—the time before the desertion of the Patna—and instinctively com¬pares the old Jim with the new. Dickens uses this artifice, too, but less delicately; he repeats his simile again and again, and at intervals so short that he uses the device as a hammer to drive in his intention.
The ornamental use of simile in sentence-rhythm is a very subtle one. It is too vast a subject to be entered into here; I will just say that sometimes the whole balance of a sentence depends upon the effective use of simile—a sonor¬ous or impressive sentence depending on a dignified simile taken from a vast fact of creation, such as time, life, death, or eternity; a musical sentence requiring something daintier and lighter, such as a simile taken from birds or flowers or running water; and a rugged style needing yet a different type, more abrupt and startling, less polished, more paradoxical.

Proverbid. The air of ancient and elemental wisdom that some authors strive so hard and so unsuccessfully to attain can often be gained by the right use of simile; but here your effect will depend entirely on the choice of the kind of simile. Simile is used very largely by country folk and peasants of all lands, particularly Celts; but their similes are of a very particular kind, and to get your effect you must know exactly the kind of thing that peasants say. “As cold as charity,” for instance, is a peasant saying as old as the fourteenth century at least, and it has the true ele¬mental ring; it might be found in the Bible, or in any book that contains a true rendering of the thought of a simple people. In Ireland you hear people saying such things as “the two hands of him were as cold and as wet as a mile¬stone and the rain streaming over it,” or, “sure, he’s no more, good than a feather in a storm of wind.” You do not hear them saying (as a certain Irish private, famous in modern literature, is made to say): “Their little bare feet were better than the white hands of a Lord’s lady, and their mouths were like puckered roses.” Simile is a good way of achieving your effect if you are speaking of peasant life, for it is one of the poetic beauties of genuine peasant speech; but it must be such simile as would naturally occur to a cowherd or a fisherman or a washerwoman.

the kind of simile :

PROSE SIMILE

         1.       Like an eagle at sea, he was alone.
         2.       Ambition is like hunger; it obeys no law but its appetite
         3.       Ambition is like love, impatient both of delays and rivals
         4.       You are still as straight asan arrow.
         5.       She was beautifull as a morning in spring time
         6.       She explored new minds, like a travel in uknown lands
         7.       Broken bubbles are like Humpty Dumpty: they can’t be put together again
         8.       The castle was gray and grim like a brooding sentinel
         9.       The city was like a fairyland or a nightmare, as the mind chose to take it.
         10.   He ruled audiences like an uncrowded king.


POETIC SIMILE


April

For April sobs while these are so glad;
April weeps while these are so gay,-
Weeps like a tired child who had,
Playing with flowers, lost its way




Emotion

For there aremoments in life, when the heartis so full of emotion,
That if by chance it be shacken, or into its dephts like a pebble
Drops some careles word, it foverflows, and it secret,
Spilt on the ground like water, can never be gathered together


Grass
The green grass floweth like a stream
Into the ocean’s blue


44 komentar:

Unknown on 24 April 2017 pukul 20.35 mengatakan...

I like the material of your presentation but I do not like the way you explain it

Nur Hidayah on 24 April 2017 pukul 20.36 mengatakan...

You focus read this article,you should be explain well and give example that easy to understanding your readers,thanks:)

Anonim mengatakan...

Hey. I've seen your picture there. Your best friend friend is as sharp as pencil?. How if the pencil not shap anymore. Can u called that was sharp?

tikadestianindia on 24 April 2017 pukul 20.39 mengatakan...

In your article you have 4 main uses of simile.and please can you explain and give example according expert.

Unknown on 24 April 2017 pukul 20.39 mengatakan...

Hello Widya. After i read your post i wanna give question about simile, can you give me comparison between one expert with the another expert. ?
And then tell me about point of view from the another expert. Thankyou

Unknown on 24 April 2017 pukul 20.40 mengatakan...

Widya tok 😁
Please,try to explain the definition of the experts about simile or history from simile.
Oke???thank you

Unknown on 24 April 2017 pukul 20.43 mengatakan...

Why were you always focused on your phone and there is no interaction .do you think this class is grave?

Unknown on 26 April 2017 pukul 00.46 mengatakan...

Hii widya..your blog will be interesting if you change the view of your blog by giving a beautiful color or background on the wallpaper of your blog..thank you, i just give a suggestion :(

widya on 12 Juni 2017 pukul 06.01 mengatakan...

so sorry, next time i will not do it again dear

widya on 12 Juni 2017 pukul 06.02 mengatakan...

thanks for your suggestion :)

widya on 12 Juni 2017 pukul 06.10 mengatakan...

ahay, actually its not my pic. but its for my cover of this material, simile. hmm, in my mind, the pencil will not sharp anymore, but it is called tompul >_< nooooo, tumpul " dull pencil" but if we relate to friends, i think its same, sharp.sometime we dunno our friends like what. i mean they are just be really nice outside, but inside they are not
i think thats :P

widya on 12 Juni 2017 pukul 06.16 mengatakan...

yes, this class is so grave, lol
nooo, im kidding :P
so sorry for my mistakes, next time i will not do it anymore

widya on 12 Juni 2017 pukul 06.18 mengatakan...

thanks for ya suggestion,but im interested with this template, so simple. maybe in phone is looked different by laptop.

Unknown on 12 Juni 2017 pukul 06.21 mengatakan...

Hello widya. You only give examples without explanation. Could you tell me definition about prose simile, poetic simile, and emotion ? Thank you

farizazkiyali.blogspot.co.id on 12 Juni 2017 pukul 06.35 mengatakan...

hai awik.. or widya. i just want to comment your presentation, so far so good. but u always focus with your gadget and didn't interaction with us as a audience...

Unknown on 12 Juni 2017 pukul 06.39 mengatakan...

Hy widya lova..Please provide an explanation and an example of the discussion is in the use of our daily sentences

Agnesia Elvi Wisnita on 12 Juni 2017 pukul 07.24 mengatakan...

I don't like your blog, because you don't have a something new for remake your blog becoming good. Hey! It's public. Do not embrass yourself.

Ester Mayer Hasibuan on 12 Juni 2017 pukul 07.28 mengatakan...

Hi, Widya Lova. Why your writing style is a mess? Maybe you can fix it to make it look good

DYOFICA on 12 Juni 2017 pukul 08.09 mengatakan...

Hi Widya, thanks a lot for posting this material. but I damn wonder of your written. you wrote above that so the main uses of simile are four, and are as follows:
a. Purely descriptive
b. Associative
c. Ornamental only
d. To give an effect proverbial wisdom.
and fact, you just explained not at all.
please clear all of those
thanks

Dwigitasarit on 12 Juni 2017 pukul 08.19 mengatakan...

I don't like your posting because your posting not make me understand about this topic and u presentation is same so boring

widya on 12 Juni 2017 pukul 08.22 mengatakan...

i think you did not hear me at presentation. i have done explain it in front of class. prose simile, we dont need follow the rules of poem, in bahasa tidak mesti berakhiran huruf "d" semua.
poetic simile, it must follow the rule. like the example april, dydy.
and emotion, i think you are misunderstanding. its not the kind of simile. but its another examples by poetic simile, thanks

widya on 12 Juni 2017 pukul 08.23 mengatakan...

i'm sorry for mistake, i promise never do it again

widya on 12 Juni 2017 pukul 08.29 mengatakan...

lol, never embrass myself. actually early morning i was editing my blog at class and hell yeah there's something went wrong and made it worse. ya,i was editing in blog**r app, as you know its not good app enough.
but thanks for your honet

widya on 12 Juni 2017 pukul 08.33 mengatakan...

before my blog about this material is nice. but early morning i was editing to add some paragpahs and so pity i am, and my blog look random asdfgh :(
so sorry, i will fix it

widya on 12 Juni 2017 pukul 08.43 mengatakan...

damn, i think you did not hear me at class. i just explained it in front of class. but ya i dont writte in my blog.where did you go? >_<


PURELY DESCRIPTIVE. The useof simile for description is, as said at the beginnng, the chief use tto which it is put; it behooves you, therefore, to be especially careful in your use of it, so that you employ it to the very best advantage in this capacity. Take this, from a novel of last year’s date:

“ her face was like a large and limpl stuffed cushion on which the features have been carelessly grouped and fastened on by means of a pair of glasses like a safety pin.”

Or this from a rather older novel

“ her skin was like the skin of a sucked grape, soft and wrinkled”

To acquire a free, bold and good use of simile, you should to do three things; first, and most important, to watch the similes that occur to you instinctively, rejecting the bad and stoping up the good for future use.

Associative. The second use of simile is nearly as important as that of pure direct description; it is this, to suggest by means of the simile employed the hidden character of the thing you are describing. Thus Dickens, describing a fire which is going to cause an incendiary blaze, says:
“The fire glowed sullenly, like the eye of a savage beast half asleep.”
That prepares you for the fact that it is going to do harm. If you read that a character in a book has eyes “like a wolf’s,” you know that he will have something of the wolf in his nature; if, on the other hand, he has eyes “like a dog’s,” you understand that he will probably be faithful as a dog is; and yet a wolf’s eyes are very like a dog’s. You can thus use simile to insinuate a characteristic which you do not wish to put into so many words. This is very useful—if you do not allow it to lead you into making obvious similes and indicating stock characteristics, as is the case in this second example. The first example is good, for the simile is not too commonplace, and the intention of implying evil is clear; the second is both a commonplace simile and depends for any truth it may have on the stock idea of the natures of dogs and wolves.

widya on 12 Juni 2017 pukul 08.43 mengatakan...

Ornament. This is a quite legitimate, tho very dangerous, way of employing simile. Sometimes a simile put in merely to improve the rhythm of a sentence, or to enhance the effect of a description already given, is justified by its result; but the dangers are obvious. You run the risk of creating an impression of artificiality or of over¬loading. However, when you have really mastered the diffi¬cult art of creating good simile, either by careful compari¬son in your mind’s eye or by the study of the means em¬ployed by such creators of simile as Conrad and Mr. Ches¬terton, you can well experiment with the ornamental use of simile. It is particularly effective in a story written in a
rather bare, straightforward style; the sudden introduction of a particularly apt simile arrests the attention, and forces the reader to take particular note of the passage in which it occurs. So, too, it is often very effective to recur to a simile already made in order to recall the circumstances under which it was first made. For instance, in “Lord Jim,” when the author wishes to remind the reader of the state of mind of his hero on an earlier occasion without putting it before him in so many words, he again makes use of the simile employed on the earlier occasion. He again refers to the “thin gold shaving” of the moon and the sea “like a sheet of ice,” and immediately the reader thinks of the first occasion on which the similes were used—the time before the desertion of the Patna—and instinctively com¬pares the old Jim with the new. Dickens uses this artifice, too, but less delicately; he repeats his simile again and again, and at intervals so short that he uses the device as a hammer to drive in his intention.
The ornamental use of simile in sentence-rhythm is a very subtle one. It is too vast a subject to be entered into here; I will just say that sometimes the whole balance of a sentence depends upon the effective use of simile—a sonor¬ous or impressive sentence depending on a dignified simile taken from a vast fact of creation, such as time, life, death, or eternity; a musical sentence requiring something daintier and lighter, such as a simile taken from birds or flowers or running water; and a rugged style needing yet a different type, more abrupt and startling, less polished, more para¬doxical.

(c) Proverbid. The air of ancient and elemental wisdom that some authors strive so hard and so unsuccessfully to attain can often be gained by the right use of simile; but here your effect will depend entirely on the choice of the kind of simile. Simile is used very largely by country folk and peasants of all lands, particularly Celts; but their similes are of a very particular kind, and to get your effect you must know exactly the kind of thing that peasants say. “As cold as charity,” for instance, is a peasant saying as old as the fourteenth century at least, and it has the true ele¬mental ring; it might be found in the Bible, or in any book that contains a true rendering of the thought of a simple people. In Ireland you hear people saying such things as “the two hands of him were as cold and as wet as a mile¬stone and the rain streaming over it,” or, “sure, he’s no more, good than a feather in a storm of wind.” You do not hear them saying (as a certain Irish private, famous in modern literature, is made to say): “Their little bare feet were better than the white hands of a Lord’s lady, and their mouths were like puckered roses.” Simile is a good way of achieving your effect if you are speaking of peasant life, for it is one of the poetic beauties of genuine peasant speech; but it must be such simile as would naturally occur to a cowherd or a fisherman or a washerwoman.

widya on 12 Juni 2017 pukul 08.44 mengatakan...

okay thanks

widya on 12 Juni 2017 pukul 08.50 mengatakan...

okay, lets see!!!!
according the book i have read, PURELY DESCRIPTIVE. The useof simile for description is, as said at the beginnng, the chief use tto which it is put; it behooves you, therefore, to be especially careful in your use of it, so that you employ it to the very best advantage in this capacity. Take this, from a novel of last year’s date:
“ her face was like a large and limpl stuffed cushion on which the features have been carelessly grouped and fastened on by means of a pair of glasses like a safety pin.”
Or this from a rather older novel
“ her skin was like the skin of a sucked grape, soft and wrinkled”
To acquire a free, bold and good use of simile, you should to do three things; first, and most important, to watch the similes that occur to you instinctively, rejecting the bad and stoping up the good for future use.

Associative. The second use of simile is nearly as important as that of pure direct description; it is this, to suggest by means of the simile employed the hidden character of the thing you are describing. Thus Dickens, describing a fire which is going to cause an incendiary blaze, says:
“The fire glowed sullenly, like the eye of a savage beast half asleep.”
That prepares you for the fact that it is going to do harm. If you read that a character in a book has eyes “like a wolf’s,” you know that he will have something of the wolf in his nature; if, on the other hand, he has eyes “like a dog’s,” you understand that he will probably be faithful as a dog is; and yet a wolf’s eyes are very like a dog’s. You can thus use simile to insinuate a characteristic which you do not wish to put into so many words. This is very useful—if you do not allow it to lead you into making obvious similes and indicating stock characteristics, as is the case in this second example. The first example is good, for the simile is not too commonplace, and the intention of implying evil is clear; the second is both a commonplace simile and depends for any truth it may have on the stock idea of the natures of dogs and wolves.

widya on 12 Juni 2017 pukul 08.54 mengatakan...

Ornament. This is a quite legitimate, tho very dangerous, way of employing simile. Sometimes a simile put in merely to improve the rhythm of a sentence, or to enhance the effect of a description already given, is justified by its result; but the dangers are obvious. You run the risk of creating an impression of artificiality or of over¬loading. However, when you have really mastered the diffi¬cult art of creating good simile, either by careful compari¬son in your mind’s eye or by the study of the means em¬ployed by such creators of simile as Conrad and Mr. Ches¬terton, you can well experiment with the ornamental use of simile. It is particularly effective in a story written in a rather bare, straightforward style; the sudden introduction of a particularly apt simile arrests the attention, and forces the reader to take particular note of the passage in which it occurs. So, too, it is often very effective to recur to a simile already made in order to recall the circumstances under which it was first made. For instance, in “Lord Jim,” when the author wishes to remind the reader of the state of mind of his hero on an earlier occasion without putting it before him in so many words, he again makes use of the simile employed on the earlier occasion. He again refers to the “thin gold shaving” of the moon and the sea “like a sheet of ice,” and immediately the reader thinks of the first occasion on which the similes were used—the time before the desertion of the Patna—and instinctively com¬pares the old Jim with the new. Dickens uses this artifice, too, but less delicately; he repeats his simile again and again, and at intervals so short that he uses the device as a hammer to drive in his intention.
The ornamental use of simile in sentence-rhythm is a very subtle one. It is too vast a subject to be entered into here; I will just say that sometimes the whole balance of a sentence depends upon the effective use of simile—a sonor¬ous or impressive sentence depending on a dignified simile taken from a vast fact of creation, such as time, life, death, or eternity; a musical sentence requiring something daintier and lighter, such as a simile taken from birds or flowers or running water; and a rugged style needing yet a different type, more abrupt and startling, less polished, more para¬doxical.

Proverbid. The air of ancient and elemental wisdom that some authors strive so hard and so unsuccessfully to attain can often be gained by the right use of simile; but here your effect will depend entirely on the choice of the kind of simile. Simile is used very largely by country folk and peasants of all lands, particularly Celts; but their similes are of a very particular kind, and to get your effect you must know exactly the kind of thing that peasants say. “As cold as charity,” for instance, is a peasant saying as old as the fourteenth century at least, and it has the true ele¬mental ring; it might be found in the Bible, or in any book that contains a true rendering of the thought of a simple people. In Ireland you hear people saying such things as “the two hands of him were as cold and as wet as a mile¬stone and the rain streaming over it,” or, “sure, he’s no more, good than a feather in a storm of wind.” You do not hear them saying (as a certain Irish private, famous in modern literature, is made to say): “Their little bare feet were better than the white hands of a Lord’s lady, and their mouths were like puckered roses.” Simile is a good way of achieving your effect if you are speaking of peasant life, for it is one of the poetic beauties of genuine peasant speech; but it must be such simile as would naturally occur to a cowherd or a fisherman or a washerwoman(Grenville Kleiser)

JuliantiSR on 12 Juni 2017 pukul 08.56 mengatakan...

Hey hey widia you just explained about smile too nervous you not focus.so i can't geet your point about this topic?

widya on 12 Juni 2017 pukul 08.59 mengatakan...

ghost, i dont have name tok :(
you can call me awik or lova :P

Simile is usually used in forms of poetry, is sometimes divorced from its proper relationshipand forced into the association of prose. Smile is always the product either of the fancy or of the imagination, and is therefore a poetic attribute( grenville kleiser) for history, so sorry i dunno. i have tried it, looking for books, journals and also googling. i dont get it

widya on 12 Juni 2017 pukul 09.02 mengatakan...

really? i think you are nervous, till you wrong to mention my name. WIDYA no widia:)

widya on 12 Juni 2017 pukul 09.05 mengatakan...

Simile comes from the Latin word similis which means something similar and that is basically what a simile is. It is a comparison between two things that are different but may seem similar in a way. It is different from metaphor as it does not say that something is exactly like something else (like metaphor), instead it just makes a direct comparison of the similarities.

For example – Those two are like two peas in a pod; sometimes they even say the same things. – Here the comparison is made between two people being very similar in thought and action, the way that peas are nearly identical to one another.

There are no specific rules of simile construction in the English language; it depends entirely on your imagination and creativity. The only thing you must make sure of is to compare two things that may have a similar look or feel, etc..

Generally the prepositions ‘like’ and ‘as’ are used to form similes :

She is as graceful as a ballerina.

His voice is like the lion’s roar.

widya on 12 Juni 2017 pukul 09.14 mengatakan...

according grenville kleiser Simile is usually used in forms of poetry, is sometimes divorced from its proper relationshipand forced into the association of prose. Smile is always the product either of the fancy or of the imagination, and is therefore a poetic attribute.
and A simile is a figure of speech in which one thing is likened to another. This is usually achieved by the use of the word like or as.

so i think the point of view both of them are same. why? cause simile is comparison between two things that are different but may seem similar in a way.

elfridakartikadewi on 12 Juni 2017 pukul 09.19 mengatakan...

hy widya,when u presentation why were you always focused on your phone and there is no interaction.Are you nervous???

widya on 12 Juni 2017 pukul 09.44 mengatakan...

maybe, but sorry im foccus on phone. but i think sometimes i look the audinces too, but not for long time. so sorry, i hope i never do it again ;)

Unknown on 12 Juni 2017 pukul 10.04 mengatakan...

it is enough for me. no space to debate. thanks

riska yuliana on 12 Juni 2017 pukul 10.34 mengatakan...

Your discussion is too long, it makes me hard to understand about your explanation, please show point to point about your material. Thankyou

widya on 12 Juni 2017 pukul 16.11 mengatakan...

thank's a lot :)

widya on 12 Juni 2017 pukul 16.13 mengatakan...

lol, i have changed or fixed my blog. so many suggestion or comments asking about that.

yena risky N on 12 Juni 2017 pukul 19.48 mengatakan...

nice widya,i see your blog very interesting to read:)

widya on 15 Juni 2017 pukul 08.57 mengatakan...

thanks

Nurul Fathia Salma on 15 Juni 2017 pukul 11.17 mengatakan...

Oh ya, I'm sorry.. after I see it by laptop. It looks so beautiful, and I really like it..

tikadestianindia on 15 Juni 2017 pukul 18.55 mengatakan...

thanks after explain to me

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